100 word challenge

OMG look at all that chocolate  i wonder where we should hide all of it so mum doesn’t see it.

“the cupboard”  nah she will see it

” the washing basket”   she will still see it

“i know our bellies”

that is a great idea everyone eat eat before my mum comes home.

 

Ding Dong

mums home everyone hide.

“hello i am home anyone here i have cookies”

yay cookies i can’t wait to eat them.

 

wait a second i am full from all that chocolate i just ate oh well guess i have to est them another day

Bye Bye.

100 word challenge

“why did you do that mum, i loved that toy!” As i said crying to my room and slammed the door behind me, i knew things were not going to be the same with out my toys we….

Played in the park together

we went swimming together

and i would sleep with you when i got scared

we did everything together i don’t no why my mum though my toy out. i am so up set i can’t even believe she did that. (beep beep beep beep beep time to get up time to get up) oh it was just a dream.

100 word challenge

“Where are my boots? oh yeah right, now i remember where they are, they are at the bottom of the lake. How did they get there you ask well it all started like this. i was at the lake with my friends and and we were all taking turns diving in then when it was my first go i got ready i moved back for a run up then i run as fast as i could then i jumped. SPLASH!!!!!!!!! went the water, when i got out something didn’t feel right then i realized my boots. i saw them floating away.

the end

100 word challenge

this is something i care about.

this is something that cudgel me in the night when i was scared.

i love this thing so much.

i took it to my first camp and sleepover.

you helped me though rough nights.

you are very pretty.

you tried to read me stories but you never talked.

you are my best friend.

you slept with me in bed

my mum and dad got you for me.

i got you when i was just born in the hospital.

do you know how it was.

it was my teddy bear

( his name was cludey)

 

100 word challenge

i see a door in front of me i am not sure if i should go through it or if i should not. the door is black and brown it is old and dusty. there are spider webs all over it and a lock that fits a key. i have found the key to the door. here it goes i put the key in and so, what lies ahead nobody except me will know. i am looking in the door i see everything my past and present even my future. no wait isn’t it bad to see your future.

no stop!!!

100 word challenge

Ready or not here i come! Lilly yelled. we were playing hide and seek i was hiding in the bushes, i thought it was a really good hiding spot. while i running to hide somewhere else i noticed wet mud and i stepped in the wet mud and hid again Lilly saw the footprints but she didn’t know who’s they were so she kept on looking. then all of a sudden i looked behind me and there Lilly was. Now we have to find the others i said but then i saw everyone standing next to her. i won the game.

100 word challenge

what a nice day at the beach no one recognizing us and no screaming fans. if only everyday was like this one. i still can’t believe it i am definitely, definitely not a famous celebratory. oh no is the the paparazzi oh no oh no. then the girl seating on the chair behind me recognizes me. “It’s Selena Gomez!!” everyone starts running to me. as they came rushing towards us we just had to run. we were running around the beach for what felt like 1-2 hours! then they stopped staring at something i wasn’t sure what but i just run.

100 word challenge

it feels so good to be on the sand again after the incident but i am all better and healed up. i hope my family wasn’t to worried about me while i was gone i better go and tell them i am okay. i am swimming in ocean i am swimming in the ocean i kept repeating out loud. then i see something oh great it was another shark hang on it was the same one that you know bite me i know i don’t even taste nice. i was swimming and swimming but he bit me and i ended up back in the hospital.

 

 

Reading task

Title: My Forever Home

Author: Gail

 

Physical

it doesn’t say what he looks like or what he is but  i think it is a cat because he said

“Come on Sammie, here puss puss puss.”

and

“He is worth purring for”

he is the main character so he plays a big role. at first he is looking for a home then at the end a family takes him in. he is really angry at first then he softens up because he found a family that loves him. with his experience i am not quite sure what it was.

Intellectual

i think he was quite smart because he knew that in the middle of the night at the back of everyone’s door there was food for him to eat. he knows that now he has found a family that loves him and that won’t kick him out like all his other owners. he was a big impact for the boy because i sounds like he was a lonely child so having a pet and someone else is a big impact. i think if the family didn’t take him in he would survive just fine because he knew where the ocean was and were to get food and even better he had shelter. i think he learns that there was hope that people or a family would still love him.

” people left food out at heir back door and i knew exactly where to go and find it.”

Emotion

well at the beginning i guess he felt lost and hopeless and at the end i guess he feels the opposite to lost and hopeless. his feelings change because like i said before he felt lost and hopeless but at the end he feels like that he has a home and hopeful greater things will come. i think he feels like he is a nice and grateful cat but i guess over time he has to rethink it because no loves and he just has to keep walking. when he see people knocking down things that he lives with he doesn’t know what is going on so he thinks it is for him.

“now i have a massive bedroom underneath this platform. Wow, could my life get any better?”

Social

well in the beginning he doesn’t get along with any of the people but at the end he gets a family. i think the boy wanted to be his friend because i think he was hoping he would be his pet. at the beginning he was really low now at the end he is really high in the families eyes. i think i doesn’t affect the story much it’s just like at the beginning no one wanted him or liked him and at the end a family wanted him and gave him love and a home.

” wow i have a nice family, they all moved in that day.”

Philosophy

i think he thinks his life is like one big nightmare because nothing he did went right at first, i think i based this on because he just was walking around no where to go and no where to stay with the fact that no one wanted him to be there pet or part of their family. these choices don’t really affect him really. like i said before at first it was like a nightmare then it change because he found a home and a family. i guess the family really wanted a pet and i guess when they found him they were really happy.

“They became forever family.”

 

Reading Task

Title: Charles

Author: Shirley Jackson

 

1st fact

I think Laurie, Charles and the mum i think or narrator are the main characters. Laurie’s personality is like he gossips about what Charles does everyday that is bad. Charles is a trouble maker and loves to not corporate. the mum or narrator is like a nervous and sensitive type.

Laurie: “; Charles yelled during story hour and hit a boy in the stomach and made him cry.; Charles yelled during story hour and hit a boy in the stomach and made him cry.”

Charles: “Look at my thumb. Gee, you’re dumb.”

Mum/Narrator: “bad grammar, and this Charles boy sounds like such a bad influence.”

 

2nd Fact

I guess that Laurie wants to be cool because I think he wants to copy Charles because he is cool.

Charles:  “He yelled so much they sent a boy in from first grade to tell the teacher she had to make Charles keep quiet, and so Charles had to stay after school. And so all the children stayed to watch him.”

that is want he wants I think.

 

3rd Fact

well… I think he encountered just going to school for the first time and not being with his parents for a whole day for the whole year. because in the 1st paragraph it talks about how Laurie leaves for school with his next door neighbour.

“I watched him go off the first morning with the older girl next door.”

 

4th Fact

I learnt that Charles was basically the opposite personality to everyone mentioned in the story. I also learned that the main message ws I think to be your self because I guess he wanted to copy the other guy Charles.

“You know what Charles did today?”

5th Fact

the setting was at school and his home I think the author chose those settings because their your everyday places you  go unless you go to work. I think he created this type of world because like I said before I think the author chose this world is because that’s our/everyone’s natural environment.

“The day my son Laurie started school he abandoned corduroy overalls.”