100 word challenge

100 word challenge

i was about to leave for school when i saw a box at the door step “when did this arrive?” i said in my head. i picked it up and it was for me. i sat there in my room for a while thinking what to do with it. finally i came up with the conclusion that i will open it then hide it. inside it it was an-dusty jewellery box it was a beautiful box with gems on it. inside the jewellery box was………nothing, then by the time i looked in it i was going to be late for school. so i left.

One thought on “100 word challenge

  1. Hi Em,
    This was a really great 100wc. There were a few parts that confused me though. First of all you didn’t use capital letters which made it a bit hard to read. Also you said the box WAS for you so why were you going to open it and then hide it, after all, it is your isn’t it?
    It was really great and I hope you keep writing similar 100wc’s!!!
    -Lucy

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